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AmyJane27, September 7th, 2010, 4:55 pm

Great Story!
I am really enjoying your comic but I have found some small grammar errors. It does not bother me but I want to help you so I decided to let you know when I see one. I don't know if you can edit or not.. And I am not trying to be rude, just helpful. Like I said I really like your story.

anyways, "Don't Made Up Stories About Him!" should be "Don't *Make up stories about him!"

And "It's in YouTube!" should be "Its on Youtube" ? maybe.. I guess it could go either way, I never though about it..








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